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This One's For You

through your eyes
your gentle spirit escapes
to touch the hearts of others, in spite of yourself

intoxicating charm softly warms razor sharp wit
a humor quite addicting

the whole of you
deeply amazing
though not without flaws
pure perfection in my heart

compassion personified
from an experienced understanding

true love

without a spoken word
enough said

Author notes

If there is one true love in life...
This is it...

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  • mcfreeman
    September 23
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    seasons....

    one following the other


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 16

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    Sometimes, nothing more need be said. This is lovely and beautiful. Gentle and tender, you have given a wonderful gift from the heart. So nice to read and enjoy this morning. ~Pamela


    • jt4mc silver member
      September 17

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      I wasn't sure if this would be enjoyed by anyone who did not know who I was writing about. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This man is the perfect blend of cynical wit & understanding. A man of few words when it comes to "deeper" things. He's kind of a smart ass but that is part of his charm, as well as a protective shell under which lies the most sensitive, compassionate man I have ever been involved with.
      And yes the leaves are starting to turn here... up in Mora anyway. I am right now living in both places until the end of the month when my lease is up in the cities. Most of my stuff is on boxes, 75% is in Mora... I hate moving, but can't wait to be out of here!!! I love it up there!!!!
      Thanks for your comment... I really must read more of your stuff! I hope to have more time to write & read. Have already met another writer there & talked about starting a writers group.
      Hope you are well, thanks again
      Janet