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10pm, Emergency Room.


I remember it being so black
thatI could dance with stars
that blinked their morse,
the eyes flashing messages
I never learned to read

before I was pried from a reverie
and forced to open my eyes,
against a wall in the corner
of a grey emergency room,
behind a lavatory cubicle
where we could be ill,
physically -
in case they weren't sure
we had a reason to be there
amongst the tragedies they judged
more life-threatening than my death.

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  • StarEyes
    September 15

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    My Darling Sunny Chelli

    What a read you have here! WOW! I love the discriptions in this one! You my darling, have a way with words, that amazes me sometimes!

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Mom