the ultimate warrior
the bearer of judgement
greater than any god
and more powerful than a titan
his heart is colder than ice
and his armor is terrifying
his weapon expells pure torture
and his helm is the manifest of evil
he reigns on the edge of madness
with a black orb in hand
he rains down judgement on all who oppose him
and the verdict is always Guilty
he brings upon new faith
a faith in a new era
where criminals run rampant
and no one to stop them
he descends from the skies
a demonic lance in hand
and smites all ill-bearers
sending them to oblivion
he walks among to dark
but wills with the light
he is neither friend nor foe
and the greatest threat of mankind
he instills fear among his peers
and brings down merciless punishment on those who do wrong
he is the ultimate bearer of the staff
he is............
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...the Judge of the Obelisk..
Comments
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Wow
Very good, It felt real and like I was pulled into it. I think the world could use someone like this.

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Daughter of Night
Nice poem anthony one of your greatest i like the detail and emotion put into this particular piec. My favorite line is "he walks among to dark, but wills witeh the light" very well written and described. keep up the good write.
your friend,
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wow!
tah tis a really good poem!!!!!!!



