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Somethimes I Wonder

And you wonder why I can't sleep at night..


I love how you seem to be right on cue.
Every time I seem to be doing just fine without you,
You seem to be able to sense it and come running.
I think it's just because you can't stand me to be happy.


I wonder if you were to ever see the tears literally fall from my face,
Would it change anything about who you are and what you do to me?

If you were to see me, my hands pulling out .every little strand.,
Would you feel bad about a single thing you said to make me hurt?

What if you saw me throwing myself across the room?
Would you regret anything or would you continue?


How do I even know you truely love me?

And even after realizing all of this,
I know that I can never let you go..

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  • StarCrossedOut
    September 24

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    Incredible.

    I really like this one.
    I've seen you do all these things.
    It's not pretty, but you painted it beautifully
    I felt like i was watching it all over again


    • Beautiful Sin-
      September 25
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      yeah.. I try to forget everyone that I've shown..

      But thanks for the comment..
      I tried..
      Kinda hard o put everything into words..