THE LOST DUCK THE ADVENTURE HOME
The duck goes quack quack
Homeward bound
Entering unknown waters
Lost he was
Oh how lonely
So sad he was
Taking the swim
Duck the adventure home
Under the azure skies
Calm he tries to be
Keen was his vision
The adventure home was long
Homeward he was going
Enjoying the thoughts of home
Adventures would be over
Duck family he would see
Voyage home
Entering familiar waters he soon enters
No end to his joy
United with his family
Raising his quack of joy
Embraced by family
Home he is
Oh how happy
Many come see him
Entering families at a time
Quack quack
Allen Hollandsworth
©9/15/09
Author notes
For School time Ms. Liz's preschool class the word duck
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Your short lines tell a story...It is one of your better writes...Keep penning! M.
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thank you mom
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A little rough sounding in places... don't forget to use 's in words... Duck in places should have been duck's. But other than that one thing I didn't notice a lot of other things wrong.
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lovely
amusingly fun. Quack Quack
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smiles glad you enjoyed
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Now this was really good because you finally managed to bring the duck home to his family and friends and the story had a happy ending. I was out somewhere yeaterday feeing tons of ducks on a lake and it was so pleasant. There is one very big white duck who has only one eye and he comes and stands right at your feet and waits for you to hand feed him and drop it straight to him. Ducks are such a curious animals. Wonderfully written piece. No criticism here as you have painted a truly enjoyable adventure home for this duck.
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thank you glad enjoyed this
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How cute Wander!! I love it!! Great job!!
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thank you Ms. Liz
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