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Limerick I and Limerick II

The guy broke up with this chick,
This chick felt like she would get sick.
Until she found,
He had found a rebound,
And dumped in his hair a tick.



The room was to messy to bare,
Her mother, she tried not to care.
Until one day,
She went in (they say),
And never came up for air.

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