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Tanka and Cinquain

Your eyes shine brightly,
In the darkness of my heart.
My pulse speeds up,
Beneath my heavy, pale breast,
I awake from a cold dream.



Moon
Peaceful, Smiling
Rising, Gliding, Glowing
A symbol of nightly beauty
Moon

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