Surprised your atomic brain
Could handle this nuclear love
So hazardous to our health
But we pay no heed
These fragmented pieces
Left over from my core
We let this love explode
I'm always here for the fallout
Author notes
=)) I really love the idea for this poem.
These are the words I used from Word Bank #2::
Atomic
Nuclear
Hazardous
Fragmented
Core
Explode
Fallout
A contest entry
- Two Wordbanks! by Miss Macabre.
400 points, ended September 15, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what do ya think?
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wow
you ar an atomic reactor when it comes to making love.....wow the simile was so potent.....and hazardous....lol..a poem very well done.I loved it. Please visit me and comment me. -
Terrific
Dude. Love this poem. I love the way you used to words to describe love, very truthful all in all.
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you definitly deserve a trophy in that contest. You did so great with the words. Good job.
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Nice...
"...These fragmented pieces Left over from my core..." << Really like that line. Good job here. Good luck.
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A very good start to the contest, I love this radioactive love story you have set up here. Even using these deadly words you painted a scene of affection and not heartbreak. Thanks for entering and best of luck.
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