She must have been the wind song of November
That rocked my fragile innocence to sleep
She must have been that one undying ember
That still enfolds my essence when I weep
She must have harnessed all of wisdom’s glory
And laid it there beside me on my bed
It gently seeped from every nighttime story
And cushioned every footstep that I tred
Of all the clouds that shrouded me in sorrow
When fallen in a bitter dark abyss
She must have been the sun of my tomorrow
The promise of a warm maternal kiss
There is no other love that has transcended
The deepest emerald fathoms of the sea
She saved all of her dreams that somehow ended
And passed them on so lovingy to me
Please tell me what you think
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Splendid!
A brilliant poem and most brilliantly penned! Exceptional! poignant! Often such poems can tend to be maudlin, however yours is gorgeous, penetrating and powerful, nearly bringing tears to my eyes... I loved it!
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I am warmd by your words, master poet
It is largely due to your enthusiasm, but mostly due to your poetry, that I am writing
Thank you
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