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new starts

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as the trees loose the old
preparing for winter storms
before the rebirth of spring

so must we
let go of the past
weather the storms
and start anew
looking only forward

Author notes

pic is prompt,

had thought of something better but forgot it before I had chance to get it on paper

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 22

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    Sound advice
    I like your concept of thoughts
    rebirth of spring we are to start anew

    best wishes and thank you

    Julie