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College essay

I was sitting down, watching the gray on white, as it curved, and flourshied into thoughts, and feelings. My legs shifted, as my mind drifted. The crackle of the leaves and the cool summer breaze seduced my eyes, and blinded me from the sight of time. Word after word found a voice within my hand.I was creating. I  was enveloping my surroundings with adjectives and nouns. Sifting euphonies from cacaphonies, I found my inner tune. I was learning. I was reflecting my world with lines of led. I was aware. An aspiration, a passion, and a love, anchored my body to the chair, and my mind in streams of words. I had discovered writing.

In writing, there is life. Experiences, and changes Immured  within the pen. I watch them flutter by as my eyes gaze over lines. I see contorted faces, twisted with pains of loss. A son, a brother, and my friend, was layed into the ground. He was young, he was loved, and he is missed. Tear blotches dot these pages. I learned gratitude. I see a crowd, assembled for a single cause. Hand in hand they march. It was for peace. A boy had been shot for being different, for being unique. And so at 9:00 oclock at night I spoke to the. I wrote for them. I am embodied outrage in my heart, in the movements of my tongue. I learned I had a voice. I saw a classroom filled with students. Drinks, food, and laughter littered amongst their midst. I was in the corner with a notebook. Strong cofee undertones, drew lines beneath my eyes. I had been inspired. It was a philosophy class, that had changed my course of thoughts. In love I found god. I learned compassion. Syllables and letters, are bricks, that bridge, to change. The change of life the change of mind and the change of heart.

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  • tidoubleguher
    October 30
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    Must...read...more! Great imagery.