The grass ripples in silent waves,
as trees heavy laden with their fruits
blush in pregnant abundance
Birds chorus in song
and the setting sun
completes
another perfect day
A contest entry
- New Apples by ea.
700 points, ended September 16, 21 entries
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Comments
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A very pretty poem. Smooth and easy.
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!
The choice of words, perfect! Bravo.
Howard
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Very, very serene, beautiful.
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An ode to the day
A song for the season
Birds ever sing
Without needing a reason
A lovely picture you have painted here my friend, one can almost see it and taste it...
My morning has wakened...!
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ah the birds - i call them all budgies! me and a friend were out on a camoping drinking one one day, were were sat in a graveyard and were just drifting off to sleep when the budgies started singing and kept us awake.
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this is realy nice
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truly a beautiful peice
with love and blessings
Rend
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tis the season, I much enjoyed this image and will be apple picking saturday
ken
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You have just become another fav
of mine with this one!
You do have a gift of saying so much with so few words :-)
The background is just superbly suited too - can you do no wrong? lol.
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beautiful
Excellent imagery. Your language is rich and touches the senses. The lines have a definite music to them. Reading was a pure delight!
iroquois
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SWEET!!!!
I love the imagery in this poem. Excellent write
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This just ring a ding dings nature in my mind. I love the imagry. You always do these so well dear youu ^^
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A lovely sensuous yet straight forward poem about natural beauty and all we have to be grateful for.
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Just wonderful.
All the best
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This is a lovely poem i can dream about. Very well done indeed. Love the breeze swaying the grass.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
I felt I was there feeling that soft breeze swaying ever so gently over the grass! I could smell the odor of the fruit upon that breeze, and what a wonderful aroma is is!
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