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Guilty Pleasures

Eyes meet, breath stops
a deceiver with an angels smile,
he looks at me, I look at him
his games are all so vile

He lures me and play my heart
plucks at strings to be left untouched,
his eyes hold mine, an unyielding gaze
held captive by the eyes of lust

I feel exposed and timid
with you watching my ungraceful moves,
coming closer you whisper lies
to a heart of chaos just to soothe

My heart is pounding fiercely
as your fingertips slide past my waist,
you grin and proceed in pressing
and on your lips lie a most passionate taste

Your eyes have stolen into my heart
your body a sea of white,
you take and hold me in your arms
and it's there that I pass the night

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