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Jars Of Clay

There you are
A pain in my side
Long ago, but not forgotten
Continue to speak to my soul
I've loved her, though I thought
True love cannot be broken
Heartbreak, she moved on
Still I stood staring, Your direction
Cloudy skys, shadows
Beauty in all that I see
Hurting, broken, forgotten
Alone, though knowing You are near
Tears fallowing
Rain washing me clean
Scars in flesh remind me
Still tears fall
Lord I want to cry
Finding answers in a bottle
Forgetting purpose, reason
Always knowing
Wrong
I am wrong
Only Your grace saves
Only because of You am I saved
I hurt daily now
I ache, I feel pain
But You didn't die for nothing
You died for me
If I can handle this through You
I can handle anything
I've wanted to release for so long
Always knowing, I have been in the wrong
Always knowing, i was tempting you
I just needed You

I have to know You again!

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This was written in response to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7-Ys0mksl_k
With a lot of emotion.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    September 16

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    I started off thinking one way, then you changed direction on me. Very surprising and well written. I really like it.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 15

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    damn..

    this is deep! and tugs hard at the heart.. wow.. you wrote this with a very powerful voice my friend.. it moved me..