As the silver rain falls, the wanting
grows deeper for your touch.
As each teardrop,
falls within' my heart, the more shallow
my memory of you becomes.
As the silver rain falls,
I wonder so great to myself.
Where you rest between the dark.
Watching with my thoughts,
the silver rain growing.
The wanting grows deeper.
I wonder so greatly to myself.
As the silver rain falls.
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wow
this is beautiful. The images fly through my head and you always write beautifully my friend. I've watched your poems develope throught the years. you always seem to get stronger, and i guess that's what i've admired about you brother. You are someone i would look up to when i need to be strong. like i said beautiful write.
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nicely written love it!!
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