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I Hate Myself Today

I hate myself today,
though I know that I should love myself in each and every way.
What can I do to make you see
That I just don’t want to be me?
It seems I’m always tired.
All the happy days have expired.
And my hand, it always shakes.
My body always aches.
My head is always far away.
My bright blue skies turned cloudy and grey.
And you don’t know what I would do,
If for one day, I could try being you.
You always seem to wear a smile,
And your life just seems worthwhile.
You’re everything I want to be;
Everything except for me.

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  • findingurself.less gold member
    September 15

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    You need cookies and cream ice cream!!

    Those damn happy people!! I just hate it when all I want to do is sleep in bed all day, but I get myself up and go to work, and then people all day are smiley and "Good Morning!! How are you?? It's such a good day!" Ugh!! They can just shove it! LOL Well now that I got THAT out..... I like this! It is very real, and relatable. Great Job


  • starving4perfection
    September 15

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    aww :'( im sorry your feeling this way hunny, i understand how your feeling...
    but theres no need to hate yourself i think your an amazing person with such strength and your a wonderful friend...its just so sad you can't see that
    great poem! talk to me anytime! x x