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Shhhhhh

Calling your name when your on top of me I love the way it feels I love to fantasize of you but I love it more when it gets real The way you kiss and suck and touch it couldn't get better I love it when the pleasure and pain mixes together I wish I could have it everyday I'm starting to fiend I think that you feel it too like were in a porno scene Your skin up against mine I love how soft and smooth and when you get inside I don't know what to do you make my body shake you really get me off I want you to stay right there as I tell you not to stop its the best feeling ever and I want it to last your the perfect actor in this flick your the only one i'll cast I want you with me over and over repeat it because its amazing the way it feels when you go deep dear god you drive me crazy I could never ask for anymore you "fill" me up with joy I love it when you stare in my eyes that look could crumble and destroy the moments that we share when its just me and you I think no one else could understand so I don't speak the truth pretending like I don't even know you cause no one has to know I love our dirty little secret as we put on a show performing for one another I can't help but moan I love to hear your sexy voice that deep and husky tone It turns me on forever when I hear your name I blush GOD DAMN I'M BOUT TO LOSE MY MIND.........BUT SHHHHH KEEP IT ON THE HUSH

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  • Moonlit dusk
    September 15

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    Hey, this is very descriptive and sensual. I enjoyed the power of your words, however it was not easy reading, with no punctuation to break it up and so i might have lost some of its meaning while trying to read.


  • Blueskywonder
    September 15

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    shhh... but its so horney i want every one to know; but we can't spoil it so lets continue the mystry between me and you make love and fuck our secret just us two. Wow can i play this game, you sound like your a kinky lass who loves to unveil her ambition behinf closed doors

    very passionate and very intensly expressed you TEASE!

  • iloveapplebottom
    September 14
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    oOOPPS MY BAD YALL INSTEAD OF MIXES REPLACE IT WHEN YOU READ IT WITH MIX LOL