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"somebody"

Past the point of no return

entranced by my own thoughts

I can feel it start to burn

A fire deep inside fueled by doubt

No matter how hard I try

It just wont go out

I know I was born to fly

But right now

I feel my wings are tied

Strapped down by circumstance

just tell me I still have a chance

to defy gravity

to be "somebody"

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