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Chris

Can you really not see
How much I care for you?
Really, your smile is all I desire.
Is there no way I could win you back from
She who still holds your heart?

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  • ailill
    September 14
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    what would happen if you just said the girl who still holds your heart?

    • xXDemonxKissXx
      September 14
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      then it wouldnt really be an acrostic poem. if u look at it the first letter of every line spells chris