Believe in the angels that both you and I see
Believe in the unwilled futures they give thee
Reach out to believe they’re existence is real
Hold onto the feather spine that thee may feel
Hold the untold truth to exile the fake
Think of our existence as a world’s mistake
Believe they are a mind’s once true tale
To banish the cruel, malicious and one's pale
For angels bring the peace from the paradise above
They fly gracefully and sing songs of love
For there is an angel forever guiding thee
Just like I having an angel sleeping beside me
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The best line is the bit about existence being a mistake. i feel there are many people who feel like that at sometime or another in their lives, but one thing, and this is only my opinion. I think it would be nice to know the poet's reaction to angels on an emotional level, 'I realized I'm not a mistake but fully awake' I know that isn't very good but just to show you. Something in me wants the poet to feel better about her life and self.
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