An agony so deep it consumes all conciousness
No fear within this soul
Pure emptiness...
Ashes float upon a lavender scented breeze
Cold raindrops remain upon her blue lips
Patiently awaiting my gentle kiss
Scarlet embers extinguish before my eyes
I've waited eternity for their demise
Her icy finger tips slightly caress my face
As we embrace in this darkness I mourn for her to stay
She lays beside me and rakes her fingers across my chest
I shiver with pleasure as her nails tear slowly across my flesh
No fear within this soul
Pure emptiness...
A single ember battles extinction
I blow a pile of ashes on the flame
This seems to ignite specs of fire
That cradles the pain
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Definitely well-written Loved the powerful first line which draws you in and the repetition of 'no fear within this soul just emptiness' strengthening the already chilling concept .. Sinister and twisted feel truly captured awesomelyyyyy
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soad
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