chaos on the battle field
helmets strewn in autumn dusk -
harvest time again
Author notes
5-7-5
Honest Critique Requested
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This was nice. The imagery is fantastic. It's like the person reading it is anticipated to read the very ending to see if it is a true battlefield, a barren landscape, or a field, in which you have described here.
The chaos would be the picking of the harvest, whatever it may be. The helmets, I think, is the debris left from the harvesting.
The ending is very strong.
Good luck in the contest, dear poet.
•*~♥Dax♥~*•
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this is such a clear picture you have painted, I was driving by huge feilds now devoid of corn, looked like a battlefield, I really like this one three rollers indeed
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