I watched as you walked out of my life.
My heart shattered into pieces at that moment.
This is where I disappear, for that I'm sure.
You'll never ever know how I feel now...
The rain takes the place of my tears today.
Why did you break me down and rip me to shreds?
My pain will remain unknown now that you're gone.
I miss you....that will never change.
Now a new day shall begin to start.
But the sky is dark and dreary.
Without you here, I'm an unfinished puzzle.
You'll never ever know how I feel now...
The harder it rains, the harder mine falls.
Will you ever reveal to me your reason for leaving?
Time stopped the day that you left.
I miss you....now that's starting to change.
I throw away the pictures and the memories.
My heart yearns for your return but I know you won't.
A destroyed heart and dried tears rest on my pillow.
You'll never ever know how I feel now...
You're the one who burned my world to pieces.
You're the one I still cry about everyday.
You're the one who will always have my heart.
I miss you...but I'm better off without you.
Author notes
x x l o v e r o f d a r k n e s s x x
A contest entry
- ROUND 2 Make Me Laugh,Make Me cry, Or Make Me Think More Options inside! Something differnt!! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
650 points, ended September 17, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark & Depressing Writes! Please enter! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
400 points, ended October 17, 116 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
This was very moving, Sad, and very emotinal. I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest! Keep up the awsome work.
-
-
thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
-
-
wow
this poem made me cry! the love of my life killed himself a lil over a year ago and to this day i still cry myself to sleep and still wounder why he left. my world is so confuse without him here with me. i keep on writing poems about the pain i feel and why or when it will end! good poem keep up the good work.
ashley -
-
thanks for the comment! i'm glad you liked it! sorry if it made you cry!
i'm sorry to hear about what happened and I hope things work out for you; i'm here if you want to talk.
-
-
awh megan!:[ sad
i dont even know what to tell you... :/ -
-
ik its sad sis.
i was going for a happy poem but i started to feel sad and this is what came out.
-
-
This was rather interesting. I am going to add you too finalists. so you are going on too round 3. Good luck and Thanks for entering.
-
-
thanks! I'm glad that you liked it!
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
