lost chest discovered
waves reveal its ancient wood
gulls peck at the lock
A contest entry
- Treasure Maps by pixiestix.
1300 points, ended September 21, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Poetry smiles at the reader and asks for compassion
Comments
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cool! to find a treasure that was long lost and hidden, that sounds so cool! love the imagery. it has a wonderful flow. as gentle as the waves that brings this treasured poem to me, the reader.
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A vivid picture painted of treasure chest finding the shore once more complete with gulls who seem to try to eat almost anything these days.
Thanks so much for entering the contest.
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Your haiku evokes many images, well done in few words.
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Waves lap, gulls perch,
you bring the past to the present
perfectly...
M-C
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