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Your Brithday Wish

Emily, when you blowout your candles

Think carefully of your wish.

You could wish for something to better humanity.
Wish, everyone will show love to his fellow man.
That none will have to fear their,
Sons, daughters, brothers or sisters,
Never coming home.
None would fear the bullet-ridden streets,

Or poor souls being taken by evils of

Drugs, gambling and alchol 

With no need for a looked door,
For all hearts will be open.
But then again...
Why not wish for something possible.
Wish for more money.

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To: Emily Jean Mylee Strand
Happy Birthday Nineteenth Birthday !

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