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love makes noise

love makes noise
and the panic surging
renders me unable
to process the facts
lets try again
when silence is home

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  • newnoakua
    October 26

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    It's different for sure, but I like it
    There's something about it I've been trying to place for the last five minutes that I just can't get. Maybe it's better that way, it adds something special to the piece.


  • Rainbow7
    September 30
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    a poem with a different taste....