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I Am Me...

You think you know me?
You have no clue...
You think you understand?
Got two words... FUCK YOU!

You don't know what i am,
how i feel you couldn't comrehend!
You can't possibly understand!!!
I am enemy, allie, friend.

I am that shadow in the corner,
the darkness in your soul.
The saviour in the alley,
the pieces of the whole.

I am... I am... Me...
And yet you never knew...
                                            -Lust

it's just a warm up... been awhile.

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    September 15

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    wow this is very good! Allie btw should (if i'm not mistaken) be ally... but i'm not sure. other than that, this is excelent! Keep up your great work!!!

    TwiztidMaggot


  • Afe-la
    September 14

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    Aye, this is done quite well. The last stanza is my favourite. I like it indeed. I can feel the emotion, also i can see where this comes rfom. I have felt the same