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My Thoughts Exactly. "Dear David"

Dear David,
You are like a cloud in a rainstorm;
I'm always staring and trying to figure you out.
I'm on my back and smiling up at you, letting your love, your anger, and your strength rush over me... just let me reach you- I need to feel you.

And Dear David,
Your hands are greased and cut along the knuckles. You've got calloused skin and a beaten heart because you've loved. You still do. But, like that rain cloud, you're moving too fast for me to keep up... I'm stumbling and you just keep pushing me away.

Oh, Dear David,
Your eyes reflect an angry sky and my heart beats to the rythm of your thunder. Your wind whips the tree branches and flower petals to the ground around me and your rain eases these wounds...

But my Dear David,
Please don't let up.

Author notes

I know you'll be somewhere, anywhere I can think of... but before you leave could you point to the stars and tell me again which was the big dipper?

I'm finally doing it.

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