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A Grin For Your Sin

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One Night in Vegas
That's all I'll say
Use your imagination
Let your mind stray

To pillow fights uncensored
With strange attractive men
And satin tangled secrets
Whose betrayal I will pen

Hands tear into another
Searching for a place
Tongues twist within us
A drunken nights escape

Hours upon hours
Of stringless, clothless fun
No threat of commitment
Enjoying what we've done

Meaningless and casual
Until the sun does rise
Won't tell you that I love you
Won't look you in the eyes

It's time you take your leave
To another late night sin
I'll wave then shut you out
And keep my silent grin

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Sorry it was late, almost forgot. =)

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  • Glasyalabolas
    October 14

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    I like this a lot, cute, playful, fun but with a nice underpinning touch of sultryness.

    With a subject matter such as this, people can often get bogged down with the over-seriousness of it, it's refreshing to see it done in such a fun take, without even really touching on the main subject all that directly.

    Good write.


  • Glasyalabolas
    September 14
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    Title Prompt No.15 is:

    'A Grin For Your Sin'

    Many, many thanks and good luck.