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Can't

Can't stand to know what I know and not be able to share it.

Can't stand to fell the way I feel and not have those feelings returned.

Can't stand to feel so strong and yet be so weak.

Can't help but feel it was all my fault.

Can't help but wish that time would end.

Can't help but cry to myself at night.

Can't is so strong, more strong than won't.

But can't anyone do anything for my broken life.

Don't be afaid to critcize i'll take anything you got?

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  • amellowtruthaddict
    September 15

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    there is only one person who can do anything for your life...and thats you...these feelings you express, are going to be with you for ever, feelings of loneliness and sorrow tag along for all of life, you cant get rid of them...you can tho make sure you know how to deal with them in a mindful manner, being aware of how you feel, but also being aware you are working towards a better tomorrow...

    after all we need sad times and sad feelings, otherwise the times we are happy, we wouldnt even realize it!

    good write


  • Zohrane
    September 14

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    It sucks to feel that way. I can understand where you're coming from. Can't is a very strong word. But Will is stronger. And sometimes we must go with Have to. We have to keep going. We have to keep moving. We have to keep living. Because if we don't, what's left for us? I sincerely hope that you can get rid of your pain. Pain is to heavy a burden for us to carry forever.


    • KillerRain
      September 23
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      Thank u

      I wrote this poem a while bak but I felt the need to get it printed out for the world to see. And yeah sometimes I do feel that way still but I'm making it. You know the old saying "what doesn't kill us makes us stonger". It makes me feel good that there is support out there for the unknown. KillerRain.