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The Undeserving

You are not entitled,
to anything but air.
Damn you
for believing
you deserve sympathy .
Sympathy belongs
to those who have suffered
great loss. 
Not those that wallow. 
With wantonness desire. 

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 14
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    Brief, feeling, vivid, and well written. Short, but full of meaning. Keep writing.


  • awannabepoet
    September 14

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    Oh my, wow what a gem, what a poetic diamiond you have penned!

    Excellent

    awannabepoet