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Writers Block

Writers block..

So I'm a lay my head on the paper

Full tank of gas so I'll let my thoughts just take her

To a place where its no such words as I'll make her

If I'm down she down I'ma do more than myspace her

Seeing the rest of my life somebody call Jacob

Ring size a four I'ma velvet box and cheese cake her


Smile melting my heart every time I face her

And when I'm on the phone she shines right through the speaker

She tells me she's loves me because I know just how to please her

And I love her back for more than her pleasing demeanor

And when I talk its like she swear I could G her

Twisted mind untangles every time that I see her

Can't front I just wanna hold her.. squeeze her

Never let her go and if I do I'm gonna chase her

Wouldn't waste my time.. Its impossible to replace her

Taking my time like a pencil without an eraser

But I know its real love I could never mistake her

What did you think.. give it to straight no chaser !

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  • BitterSweetsOwn
    September 14

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    Easily one of my favs!
    You already know I love it!!!


  • shattered.frisco
    September 14

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    Wow. This was intense and actually quite nicely penned. A really good first poem on the site!!!