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Lost & Frozen

I lost my way
I'm frozen in one place
I lost sight of my God
to scared of making the wrong choice
I lost my passion
and to scared that I'll let everyone down
I lost the courage to try
but I know by doing nothing
I lost my faith
I'm disappointing my family and friends
I lost my sight of the peace
I feel the pull to leave the place and people I love
I lost my hope
Because I know i have to grow and be molded
I lost the heart to move
so I can do the work that has been laid out for me
I'm so lost and confused and I know the answers are not here

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took me a while to get the ending so I'm not sure if its going to stay.

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  • Arjita gupta
    December 11, 2009

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    There is always a phase in life where we feel that we are lost....We dont know what to do and in this course we end up doing wrong deeds..life is stuck at a turning fork...I know the feeling. Great write!