A crucial message wears the mask
of restlessness and melancholy;
a convincing disguise to those
who are willing to accept it at face value.
It holds the power to break a priceless spirit,
and to clip the wings of long held visions and desires.
It makes one believe their dreams
will never even leave the ground.
Pause, and turn down the volume on the chaos
that is bouncing around your soul.
Listen closely, and hear the truth
that is tucked between the lies.
It says, “Keep your eyes to the sky.”
“Remember what the child in you
dreamed of, what made her happy and contented.”
“Do not accept what others believe about you,
and what you can accomplish.”
“Their opinions do not define your worth
as one of God’s precious creations.”
“So spread your wings out to dry,
test them a few times,
then just FLY!”
“Believe it, because even tattered wings
remember how to fly!”
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Hey, this is very powerful, strong words that made me emotional. You have a great way of writing that captures my attention throughout. I really liked it xxx
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Thanks so much for your comment and the applause. I appreciate the support so much! Blessings, Patty
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Yes! Pushing all the junk accumulated over the years off the table of our minds and remembering how simple and POSSIBLE everything was when we were kids is a great thing to do every day.
There's a song by David Wilcox you might enjoy along the same lines. It's called The Inside of My Head. Here are the lyrics -
I got such a mess between my ears
like dishes in the sink
stuff I don't believe just tumbles in
till I don't have room to think
all my failures are on display
broken dreams of yesterday
stuff I should have thrown away,
but I've kept it here instead.
I gotta empty out the inside of my head
This could be a room with such a view
but its covered up with junk
Blocking out the place the light gets through
so it keeps me in this funk
these dark clouds are stored away,
just in case of a sunny day.
So I can stand in the pouring rain
of every tear I've ever shed.
I gotta empty out the inside of my head
I'd like to turn this place into my home
instead of someplace that I dread
cause its the only room thats mine alone
and I'll live here till I'm dead
I'll sort through what I have found
stuff that works I'll keep around
but I can't live weighted down
with every cruel old word they said
I gotta empty out the inside of my head
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This is truly delightful. It would be a wonderful thing if we could all put the chaos of our lives to the side and listen to the stillness within, the master whispers that seek the soul. Your owrds are so poignant...always believe in yourself and don't allow others to test your beliefs in yourself. In a way, your piece reminds me of the song...'deserderata' which is really something awesome. To have faith, love and the joy for life and to give of yourself is something else. This whole poem speaks miriads of these these and really gives inpiration. Thank you for the wonderful read.
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Thanks so much for your kind and uplifting comment. You are so kind my friend. Blessings, Patty
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Beautiful!! I especially loved this part:
Pause, and turn down the volume on the chaos
that is bouncing around your soul.
Listen closely, and hear the truth
that is tucked between the lies.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest hun!! -
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Thanks so much for the lovely comment. I really appreciate the support. Blessings, Patty
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Oh my....such wisdom, inspiration and love in your words, dear...I can't begin to say how much I got from your write...But do keep penning...Spirit and life are in your words!
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Thank you so much! Blesings, Patty
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This is a wise and wonderful message. When all else fails, we need to cling to our dreams. Very good write. God bless.
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Your support means a lot to me. Thank you much! Blessings, Patty
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A lovely , powerful and inspirational write !
Very evocative and touching and a pleasure
to read on this night !!!
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Thanks so much for your wonderful support Easy. It means a lot to me. Blessings, Patty
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“Believe it, because even tattered wings
remember how to fly!”
Humm..well thought work..thank you for entering.. -
You can NEVER know if you don't try! We must always put that one foot in front of the other to take that next step. Keep up with the good work. Your write offers inspirations to others. Rose
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Thanks so much Rose! Blessings, Patty
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Beautifully worded... inspiring.!!!
Wonderful reminder to listen to Truth...to look beyond the disguise and illusion of worldly chaos.Your title is also very effective.
A great read...I thoroughly enjoyed this, very well done.
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Your comments and support mean a lot to me. Thanks so much! Blessings, Patty
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omg... this was so very beautiful and inspirational! I hope that many read it and are encouraged by this. It helped me a lot. A winner for sure in the contest.
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Thanks so much Karen! You are always so wonderfully supportive and encouraging and I appreciate that so much. Blessings, Patty
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well I believe I needed to read this today
Thank you
we get caught up and tangled in the negative around us.
this is truly uplifting and very beautifully written
a true pleasure to read
God bless you my friend...
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Thanks so much my friend! Your comments and support help lift up my soul. Blessings, Pattyb
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Thanks so much my friend. I am glad that you could take something away in this. I truly appreciate your loyal support. Blessings to you, Patty
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I love the inspiration in this..It lifts one's spirit while reading such a wonderfully written poem. Superb piece you have penned.. I wish you well..
Blessings to you,
Linda
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Thanks so much my friend. You are such a loyal friend, and your support means a lot to me. Blessings, Patty
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I surely needed the stanza keep your eyes to the sky and not on what others will see you as or talk about, He knows, I am facing persecution at this time, and trusting God it gets exposed quicky and swiftly. It happens when you are in groups with your brethren and satan tries everything where there is weakness at. Thanks for your spirit to write this. Excellent. Blessings.
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comment. I appreciate the support. Blessings, Patty
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