T O R N A D O
Whirling around like a
washing machine
It's getting closer
I can hear the
screams. Spinning
spinning, faster
it turns.
Ringing
in my
ears
Feel the strong force burn
The writing shape is supposed to look like a tornado. What do you think?
Comments
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wonderfully done
I love it very nice flow and the imagery is great I could here the tornado screaming as I watched getting closer as it was spinning along.
I love the form you used here very nicely done. The beginning drew me right in to that tornado and the ending tied it up wonderfully.
My favorite lines are,
Whirling around like a
washing machine
beautifully done dear poet, keep the pen flowing!! -
I have never written form poetry like this before. You did an excellent job on this piece. I could never make a poem like this work like you did. I'm jealous
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