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Lucifer in Contemplation

Let me meditate the captivity of souls
The power of the immortal to surpass
The black reign of dark supremacy
To shatter the light let loose oblivion

Let me consider the fall of mankind
To the pits of my most humble abode
Let the pain flow in my domicile
As the ultimate power for me to control

Let me reflect on the definitive success
To defy all and emerge the winner
This chess game has become monotonous
I will be the one and none other!

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  • nature
    September 14

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    Nicely done!

    With confidence of a devil as you end.

    "This chess game has become monotonous
    I will be the one and none other!"

    Congrats for the write.


  • Deaths Prayer
    September 14

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    Great take on the prompt. I like the title

    I wish you well in the contest

    good luck also

    Let me consider the fall of mankind
    To the pits of my most humble abode
    Let the pain flow in my domicile
    As the ultimate power for me to control

    nice lines!