I am losing weight, I am getting thin.
I am winning my battle against him.
For I have my control back, I am ready to fight.
I am feeling amazing, I am feeling right.
Three days have passed now and I’m so weary and pale.
I cannot keep this up much longer, but I don’t want to fail.
For I am starving myself and loving my control,
But I am also destroying every hope to be whole.
I am devastated now, for some food I have eaten.
I am depressed now, for I feel I have been beaten.
I am tired now, I need to rest,
But in the morning, I will start again and work harder than my best.
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Powerful words, from beginning to end. Invoking thought and feeling. Keep writing!
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Blown away my friend
I am just blown away by your word once more, wonderfully written nice flow, great rhyme, awesome imagery I came alone for the ride here. The very first line just drew me in, and last wow amazing. Every word was just absolutely beautiful. My favorite lines are,
For I am starving myself and loving my control,
But I am also destroying every hope to be whole.
I am devastated now, for some food I have eaten.
I am depressed now, for I feel I have been beaten.
Again I am just blown away!!!
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