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california thunderstorm

exploding thunder
cracking sky

hear my God speak!

falling rain clears the air
and everything smells new

does He have your attention now?

racing heart slows to steady
awe and wonder and a smile...

this is the power of my God

Author notes

I was awoken by thunder the other night. in california... how weird is that? lol

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  • Pandoras-Box555
    November 15
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    Oh how I love the rain...
    Great write.


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 14

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    You can really feel His MIGHT in this,
    powerfully so
    Great job bro.