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The Universe

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Proton, neutron, electron, photon, positron.
All particles living as one.
I feel the peace within my heart.
The courage to make a brand new start.
Is it a curse?
To believe in the universe?



Grant me the strength.
To speak my heart and my mind.
Envision at length.
That all good things I will find.

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Reach my hand up to the universe.
A place of supernovas and rebirth.
Let the cosmic mysteries unfold.
Of stories untold.

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 30

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    Bountiful~Beautiful...


    I am learning as I visit this Castle Poetry... a poliverse in "The Universe" shows me this author's poetic veins reflected in the colors of a rainbow of science.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • ckwriter69
    October 4

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    Very nice Lyrics Haley!! Keep reaching for new heights!! Thanks for sharing and as always keep your pen flowing.


    • HaleyMary
      October 6
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      Thanks, Charley. Always will try to reach as far as I can, to the stars and beyond.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.


  • Denerica silver member
    September 30

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    Wonderful lyrics that reach the God of Wonders. Well done. Blessings.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 14

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    YES !!! I knew you could make the connection.


    • HaleyMary
      September 15
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      Thanks, Uncle Buddy. I think I made a connection indeed. It's funny how these revelations or ephiphanes come along sometimes. Thanks as always for your support and hope you have a great day.


  • harjeet
    September 14

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    NEW UNIVERSE!

    Such a peaceful words from you after a long time. Life never stops. Time dont wait for anyone. It tick away the moments to years to centuries. But life lives on. You can find a way through one universe to other, just need a little effort. happiness is not far away from you it is on doorstep knocking. Just get up and open the door.

    "Reach my hand up to the universe"


    • HaleyMary
      September 18

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      Thanks, Jeet. yeah, you're absolutely right, time doesn't wait or stop for anyone. Time continues to pass on by and life goes along with it. I guess you could say that happiness is at every corner. People just need to open up their eyes and look sometimes.

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