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Ashes and Dust

Echoes of

Laughter was

Faces and smiles

The past compiles

Today alone

In deep memory

No longer own

What use to be

Living empty

Existing just

Meaning's left me

Leaving ashes and dust...


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  • serenity silvermoon
    September 14

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    this was a good poem it was deep it feels like me because i feel like i don't know who i am anymore i hope you don't feel the same way but if you do i am here for you keep up the great work thank you for sharing