Where shall we meet this time
Perhaps, just once, in the sunlight?
I'd love to see your soulless eyes shine
And just maybe, you'd like to see mine
But the sun never came back up again
And your note disappeared in the palm of my hand
So much for our love, nightmare disguised
If my heart was made of rain.. this land would surely die :]
Love. Such a silly concept.
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awwwww
I really like this it has great flow and rhythm. I really like these lines,
I'd love to see your soulless eyes shine
And just maybe, you'd like to see mine
and
But the sun never came back up again
And your note disappeared in the palm of my hand
the ending tied it up nicely. Awesome job keep the pen flowing!!
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