My lover had a surprise.
He showed up at my job.
With those bedroom eyes
He came during lunch.
In his suit and tie
He pulled me closely.
Grabbed my thighs
I gushed at his touch.
And let out a sigh
I listened to the clock tick.
And the buzzer sound
I was off work.
And ready to go to town
On my man
His name is Stan.
But I'll call him MY BITCH!
That's the plan.
Author notes
Sometimes, a woman has to take charge.
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ABOSLUTELY LOVE YOUR AN haha well done ... doesn't seem like all work and no play to me haha
~Betrayals
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work...work...work...
the job is never done...
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You are right.
Yep sometimes a woman has to take charge. I think that some men need more assurance that they are loved and when the woman reciprocates it makes for a good relationship. This shows the deep sensitive side of you James.
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nice, good luck in the contest
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Ha - I like it! Thanks for entering and good luck.
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the endding came as a suprise
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