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why did you kill abel



burned my eyes on some
ultra thin white paper
little text testifying
god's construction of the universe

was just reading
native american
creation stories
and it sounds
more plausible
than a man
in the sky
using us as
his private puppets
throwing us in different
directions, leaving only
the tower of babel
to contemplate
why cain
killed abel







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some thoughts on religion

ugh

my brain hurts

oh, say what you mean

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  • sixtimesseven
    September 14
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    Read the library of babel by Borges. It is amazing.


  • internal heights
    September 14

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    ahhh you know what? I know why your brain hurts. You combined the words "thoughts" and "religion" in the same sentence. You can't do that.

    spirituality and mysticism are fun though.

    and yes really cool poem