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Du Coeur

Voici un poème
J'ai écrit pour vous
Cela peut être petit
mais il vient du coeur
la partie la plus importante
sont ces trois derniers mots;
Je vous aime.

Author notes

Written in french for my BF Brandan- here is the english version

From the Heart

Here is a poem
I wrote for you
It may be small
but it comes from the heart
the most important part
are these last three words;
I love you.

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  • XxNinjaNemoxX
    September 16

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    First of all I was like cursing my school for teaching me German instead of French But then I saw the English version so my butt was saved....
    I enjoyed this. Simple, sweet, heartful, awesome
    Thanks for entering and best of luck
    xoxo.


  • Itzamna
    September 14

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    =)
    very sweet,
    I love it mucho (thats some other language for a hellovalot, i believe....)

    I love ya darling. =)


  • KittieKatRya
    September 14

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    Aww its adorable!!!!! It really touches the heart
    Interesting in a different language......Tres Bien!!! lol
    Good luck and thanks!