Every Day Your With Me
Every day your with me
is one I am not blue
after all these years with you
each day a dream come true
We have been together
through calm and bad weather
we had our children three
raised them as ours did we
Each time I see our sons
they look so much like you
I am sure when I am old
I will see you brand new
We have been so many places
seen mountains, sea and surf
every day we savored
memories salt flavored
Every day your with me
I know is borrowed time
today is worth millions
tomorrow not a dime
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My husband is a three time stroke victim
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wonderful words that are to cherish...
Lulu
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LOVE!!! That's what I feel here. lol. But really, you've done well. Its sweet and easy to follow. Great write and good luck
Matt -
you said so much about your love and life in very few words i like this, a pleasure to read
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wow, your poem took my breath away. it is a wonderful feeling and you have writen about your story in few words and it is amazing how much those few words describe so much. thanks for entering my contest good job and good luck.
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Thank you for taking my poem my husban means every thing to me
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Please fix your author's notes! Also the Your in the title should be changed to you're. =
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yea!!!!!
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