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Tears on her wings

angel's tears cry out
complex emotions dive forth
simple cries for mercy so

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  • OurxBeginning
    September 13

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    Heya, my crazy sista. This is a wonderful Haiku. I liked it a lot. Short and simple, but not lacking in emotion. Well done, I hope you win something for this.


  • Daxteriana
    September 13

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    Wow. That's all I can say. It's beautiful in a way I really can't describe.

    I like this one.

    Good luck in the contest, dear poet.

    •*~♥Dax♥~*•