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save my love

I watched his tears spin with crimson dye bleeding from his hand.
I knew I had to save him.

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  • sgking123
    October 7
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    second

    second comment f mine..I ead it agin and felt that you had avast caring past for this guy.Isnt that true and that you did in such short space isadmirable.


  • AbidoodleCullen
    September 18

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    o0o0oh I like ettt!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Abi


  • sgking123
    September 17

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    wow

    this was so well done...i gasped at the emaning when it hit me. You have very adeptly inserted two great emotions in here...one of the loved one being helpless and the other your helping him with all you got.....tears and crimson dye...wow..Get to me read me and comment me....there is a lot common