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Scars on my arms

Scars on my arms,
Blood on my knife.
All I can do,
To put an end to this strife.

A knife to my skin,
A tear down my cheek.
No word can describe it,
No word, but freak.

Is there a reason?
Is there a means?
To explain why I have
This mutilating disease?

Only one reason,
Only one plea.
To desperately try,
To try and be free.

Never to smile,
Never to cease.
Unless someone can save me,
I'm begging you please.

Scars on my arms,
Blood on my knife.
Its never ok.
Its never alright...

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  • Zeros Nightmare
    September 15, 2009

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    I can relate to this a lot. Sometimes I feel like a freak. I don't try to hide it but I show my scars like trophies. They are the only things that make me feel alive. If I cut deep and I bleed I know I haven't let go yet.


  • emovampire
    September 15, 2009
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    loved it

    this is a really good poem...i can really relate to the way that you feel.


  • PashMePixxie
    September 13, 2009
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    This is so true, i cant say i compleatly relate as im not you, but i know the feeling often enough, well done.
    Jezz

  • xXDemonxKissXx
    September 13, 2009
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    tragic, simple, and wonderfully filled with emotion. i can relate to it too :'(. but still an amazing write.


  • starving4perfection
    September 13, 2009
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    aww :'( so sad i can relate to this alot
    its a really good poem. it flowed really well the rhymings great
    keep up the good work!


  • xXlove.she.wroteXx
    September 13, 2009

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    i really like this! you're a really good writter!
    A knife to my skin,
    A tear down my cheek.
    No word can describe it,
    No word, but freak.

    this is such a great verse! i can relate alot1 keep it up!


  • Phantom-Phanatic
    September 13, 2009
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    nice. i honestly liked it.

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