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True Love

Sun shining,
Water shimmering,
Leaves rustling in the breeze.
Summer ends,
Autumn begins,
As the seasons change their leaves.

She stands, beneath a tree,
With him smiling beside her.

The love, shown in their eyes,
I know, will last forever.

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 31
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    Very nice imagery in this piece. And ahh, one can feel the love. Wonderfully written.