Cocktail giggles
A sea-sound backdrop
Clothes abandoned in sand
Shadows dancing like light on a snowdrop
You playfully take my hand
Fingers fondle
The infinite ripples
A most enjoyable sight
A temptress laying with glistening nipples
And waves saluting the night
A contest entry
- one last summer fling (adults only) by JinSays.
1756 points, ended September 18, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A fine piece of sea side romance--by moonlight?--most deftly turned by your poetical hand! loved it!
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Sheesh, Babybun, such delicious images I have never before seen.
Brilliant,
Seriously.
'Boards.
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this made me smile, ahhhh I remember days like this.
thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, and I wish you all the best.
love,
jin -
This forcibly reminds me of the film From Here to Eternity with Burt Lancaster and Deborah Kerr where they disport themselves on the beach with waves crashing and her swimsuit glistening - if not her nipples.
Delightfully erotic. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme.
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Scintillating and sexy!!!
You are an erotic temptress indeed!!! I just love this piece!
Fingers fondle
The infinite ripples
A most enjoyable sight
A temptress laying with glistening nipples
It sounds like a passionate encounter on a beach. I take it you probably had this moment on the coast sometime! You minx you!!
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